Thursday, February 12, 2009

Sum of the Parts

An Add-On Poem by Kit & Johnnny.
Title: Sum of the Parts.
Date: February 12, 2009.
Copyright © 2009. All rights reserved.
{Line 1: Kit, Line 2: Johnnny, and so on and so forth.}



Sum of the Parts.

I tied my shoes and set out on my way
On the surface, it seemed like any other day
Until I discovered the maze I was in
Bodies that once seemed fat, now a bit thin
Without a clock we waited for the sun
Everyone agrees that it's time for some fun
So let down your hair and shake it up
Share the same bed at night and in the morn the same cup
When two become one it's something real
Equations aren't always something you feel
How can you predict the sum of the parts
Perhaps you'd like to join the Queen for some tarts
Her minstels' notes floating through the air
It's all ferris wheel music at the County Fair.



An Add-On Poem by Kit & Johnnny.
Title: Sum of the Parts.
Date: February 12, 2009.
Copyright © 2009. All rights reserved.

10 comments:

Greg said...

nice blog!

Kanak Hagjer said...

Thank you for following my blog. Liked your poem....I'll need to spend more time here.

Have a lovely Sunday.

spookydragonfly said...

Very unique...I've enjoyed my visit. I'm in the middle of some computer issues, when I'm having less troubles, I'll be back to visit longer. Thanks for following my blog!

Tom said...

Hi Johnny- Very nice to meet you. I too appreciate you signing up to follow The Ohio Nature Blog.
Tom

david mcmahon said...

I was so intrigued by your comment about add-on poems that I had to come and look. Great work, John.

About 18 months ago I invited my readers to take part in add-on stories, a sentence at a time. There were some hilarious results that you'd find by Googling ``authorblog'' and ``passing sentence''.

If you have any trouble finding 'em, just holler ....

Barry said...

Glad I followed the link back to your site.

sheri amor said...

wow... i saw your poems and its great

meggie said...

Ah ha! I like it!!

Sandi McBride said...

Electrifying blog to say the least...loved the poem to say the most...congrats on Post of the Day mention from David.
Sandi

Moannie said...

Well, that was different...rather reminded me of the old game of 'Consequences' which used to have some hilarious results.

Here from David's POTD and seem to be following Sandi everywhere.